Every Tuesday Diane at Bibliophile by the Sea hosts First Chapter First Paragraph Tuesday Intros to share the first paragraph sometimes two, of a book that she’s reading or is planning to read soon.
Last week I featured one of my Christmas presents, so I thought I’d follow that with another one of my Christmas presents, The Midnight Line by Lee Child.
Jack Reacher and Michelle Chang spent three days in Milwaukee. On the fourth morning she was gone. Reacher came back to the room with coffee and found a note on his pillow. He had seen such notes before. They all said the same thing. Either directly or indirectly. Chang’s note was indirect. And more elegant than most. Not in terms of presentation. It was a ballpoint scrawl on motel notepaper gone wavy with damp. But elegant in terms of expression. She had used a simile, to explain and flatter and apologize all at once. She had written, You’re like New York City. I love to visit, but I could never live there.
Jack Reacher takes an aimless stroll past a pawn shop in a small Midwestern town. In the window he sees a West Point class ring from 2005. It’s tiny. It’s a woman cadet’s graduation present to herself. Why would she give it up? Reacher’s a West Pointer too, and he knows what she went through to get it.
Reacher tracks the ring back to its owner, step by step, down a criminal trail leading west. Like Big Foot come out of the forest, he arrives in the deserted wilds of Wyoming. All he wants is to find the woman. If she’s OK, he’ll walk away. If she’s not … he’ll stop at nothing.
He’s still shaken by the recent horrors of Make Me, and now The Midnight Line sees him set on a raw and elemental quest for simple justice. Best advice: don’t get in his way.
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Lee Child is a new-to-me author, but by no means a new author and this is the 22nd Jack Reacher thriller. The thing that strikes me about this opening paragraph is the straight forward style of writing and the short sentences, almost staccato, which makes me think this will be a fast-paced book. When I wrote about it in my Christmas Books post I was encouraged by some of the comments about his books, so I’m looking forward to reading it very soon.
What do you think – would you read on?
9 thoughts on “First Chapter First Paragraph: The Midnight Line by Lee Child”
I’ve not read his books either though my dad is a fan. One day I will have to give in and read a book in this series I suspect. Im Surprised they didn’t get this for me at Christmas …..
It seems that his books appeal more to men …
Child certainly does write in a brisk, to-the-point way, and the stories are generally fast-paced, Margaret. I hope you’ll enjoy this one, and I’ll be interested in what you think of it.
Well, I’m going to give it a go – brisk and to-the-point doesn’t leave room for ambiguity!
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My husband has read all the Reacher book and is a big fan (though not necessarily of Tom Cruise’s definition of Reacher). I’ll be interested too in what you think. Enjoy!
Thanks, Kay – I’ll let you know.
I dislike that staccato style. I’m not drawn to the opening paragraph. At all. 😉 I’ll be interested to hear what you think when you get into it, and whether he maintains that style all the way through, or if it was just for a bit of scene-setting at the beginning…
So. FictionFan, you’re not a fan of Child. At all! I think I’ll have to start it. Soon. 🙂
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